A Scary Butterfly


I, Tita Liza, cousin Den2x, Den2x bf John, Nat2x, cousin Marion, my sister Clarisse and Clarisse’s bf Raymond all drank a flavored coffee in Starbuck Coffee, SM Batangas last summer 2006. John and Raymond were eye-catching to see moth on the wall. They borrowed me a digital camera. I said my sister, what it is that and then saw it. Raymond and John playfully photographed it. Raymond’s hand almost compared a sized moth very huge. Ohhhhhhh myyyyyyy!!!!
How do you feel these pictures?
2 Comments:
Jayson,
Your journal is very well-detailed and well-organized. However, you forgot prepositional phrases and mechanics. If you are unsure of the grammar, go to www.englishlearner.com.
Good job!
Maam CB
I wrote describtion pharagraph only but you encourge me about prepostional phrase.
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