Wednesday, July 26, 2006

The Entrepreneurial Alien

For many years, Alien was born and growing up with many aliens in another planet. Alien was so bored because they still shaped same monster. Alien also did not feel any emotion within the heart.

Alien planned to travel around the solar system. Alien departed out of Alien’s planet. Alien drove the UFO on the way. Alien arrived in Pluto and Saturn that are taking the camera. For the first time, Alien saw earth very beautiful. Alien wanted to visit there.

In the earth, Alien first landed in the Manila City, Philippine. And Alien walked on the street when the people are afraid of monster. They avoided away what Alien did not understand. Alien did wrong thing from them. So, Alien left them out of way and then had a look at how a pretty delicious in Starbucks Coffee taste.

In Starbuck Coffee, Alien said “What is that you are drinking?” I said “Of course, It is a very tastefully” and “the drinking coffee is so delicious.” Then, Alien wanted to buy flavored coffee. For the first time, Alien drunk it and tasted so delicious! Why not Alien said it will make business Alien Starbuck Coffee.

Alien opened a first day for celebrating Alien Starbuck Coffee but they cannot go there because their humans are very afraid. Alien was depressing that they were not popular for Alien. I visited again I saw; however, Alien felt a big problem. I asked Alien, “Why are you sad?” Alien answered “Because their people opposite Alien as monster.” I think I got any suggestion for Alien, “Alien Community.” Alien and I laughed out loud! Anyway, Alien contacted on the phone and e-mail to Alien of the Planet.

Aliens rode with UFOs to the earth! They were screaming out loud when Aliens landed here. Aliens ignored them away. Aliens met Alien in Alien Starbucks Coffee very surprised. Alien gave coffee to Aliens very appreciate! Aliens agreed Alien about to own the land for Alien Flag only.

Aliens finally made the land for 2 months very fast because Aliens is smart in high-tech to construct the land. Alien came the land very happy because the Aliens Community owned the land. Alien would like to thank Aliens. So, Aliens said, “Congratulations, you are proud of your land very beautifully.” Alien worked the best in business!


Characters:
Alien is major and role player
Aliens is minor and flat player
(Aliens and Alien are no gende)

That's narrative paragraph if you comment me about Enlgish. Thank you.

1 Comments:

Blogger Designer_Clarice said...

Jason,

That narrative essay you have made is pretty cool. It somewhat is fun! :)

Thanks for the journal. Keep on writing like that. However, make sure that you don't use the copy from the outside source.

Prof. CB

8:04 PM  

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